
As for my first assignment, Judy had some nice compliments, but also some on-the-spot criticisms. Compliments are good, but you don't learn anything from them, so it's the critique that interested me most. I should have plunged right into the action instead of setting up the scene in the opening paragraph; my dialog was too advanced for the age group; and the main conflict was resolved by luck, not by the main characters. Valid issues, definitely. Stuff I need to work on, of course.
I think I covered those problems with my second assignment. Or, I know I did, I'm just not sure if I did it right. Jeez, I had forgotten how awful it is to sit back and wait for someone's opinion of your work. And for this, I'll be waiting for a few weeks definitely. On to Assignment 3! On time and done enthusiastically!
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